Poetic Musings: Snow on Snow Haiku by Marion Clarke
snow on snowthe surround soundof whiteNeverEnding Story , January 22, 2025Marion ClarkeCommentary: L1 sets the scene and mood while unexpected yet multi-sensorily and emotionally evocative L3 makes this "snow haiku" fresh and meditatively effective: the N is "sound-bathing" in a world of one color.And it might be interesting to do a thematic comparison reading of the following haiku:winter solitude --a world of one colorthe sound of windBashoAnd my haiku below could be read as a sequel to Marion's:home alonelisteningto the snowlightFeatured Poet, Coviews, January, 2017
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snow on snow
the surround sound
of white
NeverEnding Story , January 22, 2025
Marion Clarke
Commentary: L1 sets the scene and mood while unexpected yet multi-sensorily and emotionally evocative L3 makes this "snow haiku" fresh and meditatively effective: the N is "sound-bathing" in a world of one color.
And it might be interesting to do a thematic comparison reading of the following haiku:
winter solitude --
a world of one color
the sound of wind
Basho
And my haiku below could be read as a sequel to Marion's:
home alone
listening
to the snowlight
Featured Poet, Coviews, January, 2017
